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Post by stylopz on Apr 23, 2021 18:42:41 GMT
Remember to vote and feedback both videos (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. P1:
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Post by N.g.N on Apr 26, 2021 0:34:53 GMT
Another MOTY. Pain: this video is so good, the song, the cc, mr. shibata Appeared in 3 videos at this event. Really a very good job. P1: This is very emotional, I will see a video of my father again and that it is "Toka Ishubi Sad part 2" is a lot for me and my rebellious heart I love your edition, I always said it, the song used is very cute and seeing Ishubi losing is very sad.
It is very difficult to choose a winner, if it is up to me I would vote for a "tie" but since that option is not there (yet) I had to put my heart to a simmer and decide ... And I think that for very little, P1 is the winner
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Post by Storm on Apr 28, 2021 14:24:00 GMT
P1: Are you going to unify belts like Gawd too? FMVC World Championship when? It feels so weird now that you upload rarely but it makes me enjoy your videos so much more. I can't stand Ibushi but you made me enjoy his stupid story so you did an incredible job! I will probably be short but man I don't have to talk about your editing, you are on of the best ever and we all know that your editing is as good as editing can be. From song choice, clip choices and to flow of the song, everything is perfect and story is super easy to follow. It's kinda like Reed's video about Ibushi but better flowing and easier to follow in my opinion. Ending is like a standout section of the video, from clips before the three count to audio clips choices that I had no idea he even said??? Video as expected is a masterpiece and a perfect sequel to one of my favorite videos by you.
Pain: I am very surprised man, have you been watching editing tutorials in meantime? Like this went from your usual good to amazing! It gave me kind of durty Shibata MV vibe but with your own spin! This had such a great flow and syncing was damn on point! You really knew how to focus on his emotions from well chosen clips and then to use his his rage in the ring. I also gotta praise the CC here because it adds to the depth of the video. I only just wished that breakdown was edited a bit better, it was way too static for my liking and I wish that his last headbutt had more important than just being a normal move. But outside of this, damn this MV was an absolute banger! Without a single doubt your best video and one of my favorite Shibata MVs, you really deserved to be in this title shot after this incredible video. I am very proud of you and I hope that you will keep up with this quality and maybe even as a champion after this damn good video!
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Post by peterkowalski on May 2, 2021 14:57:43 GMT
P1: I loved this... Always thought Aries songs were fantastic to edit with so this was a pleasant surprise. It's a fantastic structured edit and the CC it's particularly awesome, for some reason blue color corrections matched perfectly with Ibushi. Great Storytelling and one of my fav edits.
Pain: Glad to finally see a video of you with nice quality. I LOVE SHIBATA so this was a great watch. Loved how you handle the expressions and the overall pace was great, love the Andrade NXT route you're taking from not winning shit to getting one and now getting a shot at the title and actually delivering. Congrats. Great Video mate.
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Post by omzy on May 3, 2021 20:21:09 GMT
P1: I'll try to keep this short because I know i could go on forever about my favourite editor. Being my biggest inspiration for editing today, I'm always excited to see your videos, your song choice, clip choice was all perfect I just had a very easy time following on with what was happening. The overall aesthetic in this video is very pleasing and clean, there are no sore spots, and i can see your twitter work is spot on with those slowed down clips, theres almost no warping. Those rapid changing scenes during the role up was amazing, it didn't hurt the eye to see that many clip changes and fit very well with the music. My biggest issue I have is I would some more innovation, I feel like I've seen this style of MV many times and someone of your capability should mix things up a bit.I would love for you to edit something different maybe WWE every now and then as that is where you mainly started from, besides that your editing is always improving and i see how you've been champion for 2 years, well done!
Pain: This is a big improvement from the last edit I've seen of you! You've nailed CC choice and the song as well is amazing even though I've now heard it twice. The flow of the match is great and i like how you focused more on lyrical synchs rather than hitting every other beat. The shakes were flawless, although at times it was a bit predictable especially with the choruses, it was move then shake when theres the impact, i feel it hurt the shakes a little bit. Generally, this was enjoyable, from the facial expressions and slowed pace of the man, to the intensity and physicality he brings to the ring, a nice balance. Again I just feel like I've seen many things similar to this, that being said it doesn't take away from the quality of the edit, very good job here.
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Post by stylopz on May 6, 2021 0:02:32 GMT
p1: I thought you were gonna do a shitpost for Ibushi on here. Beyond disappointed LMFAO. But really this was a very pleasant surprise. This felt like a continuation to your SAD video which must've been your intention. I really loved the simplicity of this video, I guess because the structure here was so good that I could actually follow so well the story you were telling. I really loved the direction you took with this video as a lot of people in an instance are not going to understand that this is not a video of what actually happened, but what you thought that should've happened and I feel like a lot of editors just stick to show a celebration and don't add that much story or explain why, but with everything going wrong with NJPW, I feel like the ending was simply an opinion projected to it and I loved that. As to the editing though, I don't have much to say, I mean what can I say about your editing, it's P1. Really just super well edited and emotional video with some smart ideas and lyrical syncs in it. Wonderful video here man, one of my favorites of the comp.
pain: Damn this was so awesome. I guess song choice helped a lot but your editing, especially your pacing, that was flawless. Some sync needed a bit of work as a lot of beats wouldn't match the impacts. I thought use of effects was cool, shakes looked super dope, especially in the last portion of the video. I liked how you kept incresing intensity of the moves as the video went on. Color corrections choices was amazing, this was my shit definetely. I would say that maybe you should have cut the song as the video IMO started to drag a bit. I think a sin city type of effect with the CC you got going on would have suited Shibata better when he was bleeding rather than just apply black and white. All in all, fantastic video.
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Post by bluevinsmoke on May 6, 2021 7:56:27 GMT
P1: I know your channel for a long time and you always were one of my favorite editors. even tho I lost intrest in Ibushi, I have to say that you really made me care about him and feel bad for him with how you told this part of his story (especially the black and white flashbacks when White pinned him with the ropes). I'm a bit new to editing with effects so I cant say a lot, but from my knowledge, it's an amazing video! everything made sense and worked with the song so much. really high quality stuff bro.
Pain: I'm new to your channel and your work but man, from what I've seen, your'e really great. this video showed very well why Shibata was such a badass and the song was fitting for him. I liked the most your pacing, It's really something that I've noticed the most here. I really liked it, great video!
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Post by CHARI on May 7, 2021 2:05:01 GMT
P1: You are guilty that I am crying, I was waiting for this moment for a long time, finally someone makes a conceptual video and what better than the OG, the champion of this site and if I did not explain to me with the conceptual I mean that you took the Kota Ibushi's story and you told it in a sad way that many did before but you took it to the point that one feels that this is canon and it seems that Ibushi never had happy moments in wrestling and never had a great opportunity in NJPW at Not winning his biggest title and having that moment at Wrestle Kingdom, this makes me think as if you were trying to tell us something, is the champion sad? Or I'm just going crazy and imagining things. Hell, do you realize you've been around for two years? congratulations and thank you for always participating in the events.
Pain: This is your best video since you came here, you were up to the match and you weren't afraid to face an OG editor and with many skills, I still hate the part of Shibata's headbutts but you did quite well, I appreciate the short and positive feedback on my videos dude, I hope you find what you are looking for.
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Post by Arguden on May 7, 2021 8:25:01 GMT
P1: Daddy is back! This video is awesome, no 2018 P1 vibes but still. Song choice is pretty interesting, good choice for a sequel. Editing overall was really good, made the video a lot easier to follow. My favourite part from the video was when Jay pinned Ibushi, that little thing you did definitely adds so much to the storytelling and makes the video even more memorable. I was kinda surprised when the video ended with Kota losing but then I remembered how almost everyone hates him now so I can't say anything about that, also Kota holding the titles wouldn't fit the vibe of the video. Overall this is a really great video man, amazing work.
Pain/Editor King: First of all, what a fucking song choice, definitely better than mine. I think this was your best video so far, it stands out a lot more compared to your other edits. You did a really good job with showcasing Shibata, you showed more than him just beating others. CC and shakes were really cool, shakes felt a little bit out of sync at some very few parts but it was overall good. I wasn't a fan of the headbutt part, it was a nice addition to the video but editing wise it could've been a lot better. Other than that I have no complaints, really good work and now because of this video I'll be looking forward to your next stuff.
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Post by dead sarcastic on May 7, 2021 23:43:39 GMT
P1: Dont know why but I found this video to be hilarious lol. I dont even hate Ibushi, but I think I might have found this funny cause of how everything turned out after WK 15. Very happy you ended the video with him losing to Jay White. I was expecting to see the conventional structure and story of him losing and then winning at WK. And I'm happy you didnt go that route. The song choice was great for Ibushi's sad story. It had a very slow pace that matched well with every painful moment that occurred to Ibushi. Great job with transitioning from one story to the other. It all felt connected to each other and helps the viewer understand the story without ever feeling confused. My main issue with this video was the amount of slow mos you used. I get that you're trying to follow the slow melody of the song, but slow motions arent always the best technique since they can get dull, even more so when they're shown a great amount during the video. You could have added voice overs during the slow motion clips or clips that last a while to add more detail and depth. This way the viewer is focusing on more than just a long clip. I would also suggest that when you do add voice overs, try to spread them throughout the video rather than just one section as it can feel random when a voice over pops up out of nowhere during the end of the video. Other than that, the video was fantastic. It had it's own uniqueness compared to other Ibushi videos. As your video seemed to cover specific moments that showed the happy opportunities being destroyed by sad outcomes. So the story of video felt extremely sad and it definitely hit hard for an Ibushi fan.
pain - you suck and I hope you lose. 3 Shibata videos in 1 Event??? No way!! Best event ever. I really like how the 2 Shibata videos are entirely different from each other. While Argis was calm and relaxing, pain's version was fast and all over the place, but in a good way. I also like how it has a complete opposite feel to your opponents video as well. I went from being a sadboy to rocking my socks off to this video. Sick song choice. You have some of the best song choices in this group. I feel like this video might be the best you've made since your first PAC video. Not that you ever had a problem with editing, but there are times in your past edits where I felt like the pace and syncing were off at times. I didnt feel that way in this case. Big fan of the shakes during the Shibata strikes. And good idea of inserting those shakes at the latter half of the video to increase the intensity as the edit kept going. Also a big fan of the headbutt section of the video. Although I wouldn't have left gaps in between as that kind of took me out of the video just for a sec. I get what you were trying to do, but I think it would have been better had you just did jump cuts during the section. And for a video that doesn't have a linear structure to it, you kept me entertained throughout the whole thing. To be fair tho, its exciting to see Shibata kick ass, even if it is for 4 minutes long. Proud how far you've come since you debuted almost 3 years ago.
A terrific FMVC title match. Either video deserves the win.
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Post by leomercyeditorking on May 8, 2021 6:29:22 GMT
P1: The editing was nearly perfect, you followed the song's pace really well, I don't know why the knee at 0:50 gives me chills. I am not a NJPW follower so I don't really know the story well, but from the things that I know from Ibushi's story, I think you told them really well and I discovered new things thanks to this video. My only regret is that there wasn't any subtitles in the ending, because I was so curious to know what he said. A very fantastic MV.
Pain: First time I have to comment myself and my video. Re-Watching my video I really liked my CC and shakes use but some of them were out of sync and I am not a fan the headbutt part, I could do it better. But in the end my video is solid and I did a really good work.
Amazing works P1 and Me!
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Post by p1 on May 8, 2021 9:36:28 GMT
My only regret is that there wasn't any subtitles in the ending, because I was so curious to know what he said. I put subtitles, you just have to turn them on
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Post by Arguden on May 8, 2021 10:02:20 GMT
My only regret is that there wasn't any subtitles in the ending, because I was so curious to know what he said. I put subtitles, you just have to turn them on man is dumber than a fish bro not surprised
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Post by leomercyeditorking on May 8, 2021 10:29:49 GMT
My only regret is that there wasn't any subtitles in the ending, because I was so curious to know what he said. I put subtitles, you just have to turn them on Fail of the year winner...
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Post by p1 on May 8, 2021 10:43:09 GMT
man is dumber than a fish bro not surprised my opponent trying to sabotage me with his alt smh
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