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Post by stylopz on Aug 14, 2021 21:29:23 GMT
Remember to feedback video (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. Due date is 29th August.
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Post by Storm on Aug 17, 2021 12:38:18 GMT
Sami: First of all, absolutely love the song choice! I think you did a really good job in giving spotlight to all members without focusing too much on one of them more than others. Movesets shown were pretty versatile and it didn't feel repetitive which was very good. Sync for the most part was really good but I think it can be more improved on, focus on syncing move impacts or clip changes with the beat. Clip choices were good and they flowed well for the most part, some were a bit too long but that's okay, I especially loved rolling lyrical sync. Ending was a bit abrupt and I would have loved it if had faded out instead of just a hard cut. Overall tho this was a very good edit and you knew what you wanted with it, just focus more on polishing your skills and you'll be great! I hope we will get to see more of you here!
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Post by stylopz on Aug 18, 2021 19:49:15 GMT
This was really dope man! I really enjoyed a lot the video. I wasn't a big fan of how you let the announcements fonts, I know why you did to let the viewer know who the stable members are, but to be fair some other fonts would've been better, but it's something you will get better! Editing was overall solid, it was paced fine, most clips had a good amount of time, not too much or little time, you let things breathe greatly. I loved the rolling lyrical sync and everything just I dont think showing the kickout was a clever idea, I would've linked to some other similar scene to be honest. Song choice was dope I dug it a lot! This was a very nice stable study and I enjoyed everything about it! Hope to see you more around here soon!
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Post by theptsan on Aug 29, 2021 15:39:14 GMT
First of All I love how was nothing super fancy And i like how synced The MV is. In my opinion very well done
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Post by bluevinsmoke on Aug 29, 2021 18:15:24 GMT
I’m really happy to see you here man! That was a very nice video to my favorite stable in Stardom. It was pretty simple but I liked it. There were some parts that were unnecessary but I’m sure you will get better. I hope you will keep participating here!
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leomercyeditorking
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Post by leomercyeditorking on Aug 29, 2021 18:50:24 GMT
Since this is one of your first MV it's not bad at all, the sync is not perfect but it's still good, I liked how you synced the lyrics with the video, another good thing it's how you controlled the length of the clips they were good. Hope to see you in the next ones!
P.S. Good job with the feedbacks! I did 3 comps here and your feedbacks are way better than mine, if you want a proof... Just look of what I wrote above...
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Post by p1 on Aug 29, 2021 20:31:33 GMT
I could tell that this is one of your first MVs and those are expected to be a bit rough and in need of polishing, but outside of that, I liked this. You did a very good job at showcasing each member of the faction equally, without anybody standing out. Sync was fine for a startup, but I'm pretty sure it will get better over a period of time. You got the point across and the edit was good, just focus on getting better every time you make an edit and I feel that you will be a great editor.
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