"MV Showcase #2" PtSan

[stylopz]

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[Storm]

PTSan: Miyu edit from you is totally surprising. This edit surprised me with how good it was! Really big improvement from your previous edits. Pacing of this is incredible for someone who hasn't been editing that long, everything flows so well and goes along with the song pace. Sync for the most part was super good, you almost nailed it at that part! Only focus a bit more to sync all beats with impacts or clip changes if you can. Clip choices were fantastic, I loved how you used her kicking the camera as the bridge from kicking part and using clips from when she was younger when song slowed down. Ending surprisingly abrupt so I would recommend you to fade out the song and video when you are finishing your video. I want you to continue like this, simple and to the point, no random effects and just super well done edit. Very impressive stuff and I hope that you will continue competing here!

[stylopz]

Damn what a big improvement from your other videos! I thought this was your best video to date, you are really starting to get pacing and everything a lot better. You aren't let clips breathe for that long anymore and you're actually in few parts of the video going faster than I expected. Your editing really matched up to Miyu's style which is straight to the point, I really enjoyed the aesthetic of the video, and little transitions were done well althought maybe not use them so much in my opinion, but you will get it with time. There is obviously certain things I think you need to work on but cleaniness of everything will come with time and practice! Song choice was pretty neat and fits the vibe of the video you were going for. For someone who is editing on the phone this is beyond good, great job!

[Sami]

Very cool, making Miyu look even cooler ! You showed some of her best moves with some nice moments and it was really dope. The only thing I was a bit bothered by was the duration of the clips which was a bit long for some. And also the quality of them but I guess it must have been tough to find anyway so I understand. But very enjoyable video and not suprised that you made a Miyu MV haha !

[leomercyeditorking]

For being a video from a new editor this is not bad, some transitions were good but you should be careful on how much you use them, I really liked the what you got intro synced to her movements, you cut all the clips well except for 1:49 but no problem it happens especially if you are new. Amazing video and I hope to see you again here

[p1]

I haven't seen any of your work up to this point to be honest, so I didn't really know what to expect. I'm not that familiar with Stardom so I can't tell if the edit matched character traits of Miyu, but I can tell that the editing itself was done well for the most part. The edit was paced really well and it all flowed smoothly. Sync was good for the most part (I would correct it at some places, I think you already know where that is), and you connected different sections of the video with one another in a good way. Ending was the only bigger criticism I have here, it came outta nowhere and I would've done it differently, but anyway, this was a good video and I hope you are here to stay.

[bluevinsmoke]

It’s always really fun and nice to see more and more Joshi editors, because it’s less known and popular type of wrestling.
It was very nice video for one of my favorites wrestlers in world currently.
I think that you can become better over time because you have the potential.
I hope that you will keep participating here.