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Post by stylopz on Aug 14, 2021 22:31:50 GMT
Remember to vote and feedback both videos (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. Due is 29th August.
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Post by Storm on Aug 19, 2021 21:40:54 GMT
BlueSimpsmoke: I love the intro, CC was absolutely wonderful and so fitting for the feeling of the match. This felt like you were focusing on the fun feeling of the match with showing all the interactions of the wrestlers which I found fitting with a pretty fun song, but I couldn't not feel like this was a step backwards towards your older work compared to your latest competition video. I really liked the slow motion part and how you edited that so that was one improvement over the last video. Also my left ear felt neglected while listening to the commentary. I honestly don't have much to say about this, it's a fun and basic edit but I expected more and I think that you can deliver more, but still it was a fun time!
UserDragon: SOOOOOOOOO glad to see you back! You were in our first competition when I was just pretty much new to this community so I am very happy to see you back for this special event! I Hope that you will continue competing here because you are a big inspiration to Joshi editors. I see that you also chose very fun song for the edit so it makes this match more than fitting. I really like your pacing, everything flows very well and nothing overstays its welcome. Speedup choice for change into chorus color grading was pretty dope just I found color choice a bit odd, my advice would be to use some transition or keyframe color grading to go away gradually because it disappearing randomly during a cut just looks very jarring and kills the impact of it. My favorite moment of the edit probably would be how you did a slow motion for the outside dive to give it more spotlight, it's something that I used to see in highlights but don't see it very often and here it was done very well! Overall this was a pretty good edit that's a big rough around the edges, I honestly think that you also can do more than you showed us here but I am not disappointed at all, I had a fun time with it and I hope to see more from you!
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Post by stylopz on Aug 27, 2021 23:08:36 GMT
BlueVinsmoke: Pretty damn awesome edit! The sync and pacing seemed like something you are really starting to get better, at least compared to your last edit, and also aesthetically it seems like its a more refined edit, especially CCs wise. Match choice was also good, its cute that we both watched in VC that match for the Hana Memorial show and you decided to edit it. Overall just a super fun edit and I cant wait to see you grow and grow more!!! Looking forward for more of your stuff.
UserDragon: Really cool Highlights! I have seen a lot of your videos specially when I started watching Stardom, and I can tell this is not your full potencial!! But still good enough of a match for Blue! Edit was pretty nice just few sped up clips were rough and needed some cleaning if I am being honest. CCs was nice and overall it was just a fun watch !!! Really good job!
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Sami
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Post by Sami on Aug 28, 2021 16:24:36 GMT
BlueVinsmoke : Man you know how to get me : one of my favorites moments of the year along with one of my favorite Naruto's opening ! I loved it. It made me feel something. The only few negative points I'd say are the effect you used at 1:36 that I didn't really liked how it arrived, it "cut" all the "momentum" from the early video however I loved it disappears on the keep up (I think that's the name) it was beautifully done, the moment from 2:07 to 2:16 which was a bit "blank" in the music so I felt like showing the different finishes and a moonsault on it wasn't very much fitting, maybe you could have deleted that part of the song of used different effects or filters to help fitting (slow motion for example). And also last thing that I wasn't very much a fan of was adding back the audio for the Hazukistral with the commentary team, I don't know I didn't like it very much it got me out of the emotions that the video provided me. But what I forgot to say is that I absolutely loved the begininng focusing on Hana's photo showing what this match is all about, it was very smart. And once again this was amazing to have the combination of both things that means a lot and it really made me feel something special so thank you for this my friend
UserDragon : I loved how you used your effects, always coming in a nice way and you have really good looking cuts. Everything comes very nicely and smooth. You managed to show the importance and emotions of the match very nicely and I really enjoyed it
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Post by theptsan on Aug 29, 2021 17:34:51 GMT
BlueVinsSmoke: That intro was phenomenal.
I loved the flow of everything and looked like, the speed of everything was dope.
And i love how was nothing too extra.
Just simple and effective.
Dragon: your highlights video was fun,i loved the little slow mo on the part saya is jumping.
And the song choice was very interesting.
Both were very enjoyable to watch
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leomercyeditorking
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Post by leomercyeditorking on Aug 29, 2021 18:28:27 GMT
BlueVinsmoke: Man hearing one of my favorite openings of Naruto again gave me goosebumps, your edit is not complicated but it works it was really enjoyable to watch. Even if I don't know if I am not the right guy to do that since I am pretty new too I want to help you so you can improve. How you cut the match was so good since you did not make a lot of videos but the problem is how you used the audio, first of all the audios were hearable from only the right ear so try to fix it, second you should cut the audio clips better because sometimes I don't understand if you forgot to remove them or not they should be longer like the one you did in the ending. Video instead was a lot of better my only tips are to sync better the transtions and the slow motions and speed ups and to be careful with the camera changes like at 0:24.
UserDragon: Very fun highlights to watch. I liked the song choice too.
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Post by p1 on Aug 29, 2021 19:33:10 GMT
BlueVinsmoke: I always love to see new editors come into the community and grow into great editors over time, and I just have to say that you are on a right path right now. This was another really fun highlight. It was simple and nothing felt out of place, your sync and pacing is improving and overall I enjoyed this highlight quite a bit. Just keep improving my man, and I think you can become an outstanding editor in the future.
UserDragon: I'm really glad to see you back, hope you will stay for a bit more than this match only. It's been a while since I last watched your work tbh, but this highlight was a really nice reintroduction. I feel that this isn't your best work and that you can do more (the evidence is in your other videos), but I still enjoyed this one. I liked the pacing very much, but one moment stood out to me, when you used the slowmotion to show the importance of a dive as a possible match-shifting moment. As I said, it wasn't your best work as some things could've been more polished, but overall a fun watch.
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Post by Arguden on Aug 29, 2021 20:06:23 GMT
BlueVinsmoke: I feel like you tried to make a chill, fun video and if it was your approach, you succeeded. In videos like these I usually watch it for the match instead of the edit, so I don't know what to say honestly. I can say that I was expecting a video with more effects but as a chill highlights video it does the job and that's what matters. Good work.
UserDragon: A similar video to BW, I can say all the things I said above for you too. I didn't see many videos of you but as far as I remember this is a little bit basic for you, but it doesn't mean it's bad or anything like that. Like I said with BW, your video was fun to watch and chilling. Good work once again.
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