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Post by dead sarcastic on Dec 26, 2018 23:25:05 GMT
Since Pain did not submit a video, he is disqualified and the winner of this match is P1. He will now move on to the finals of the Robert Paulson Memorial Tournament. However everyone still need to give him a reasonable amount of feedback. P1 will also be voting and giving feedback in every match.
P1:
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headcheese
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Post by headcheese on Dec 31, 2018 17:16:35 GMT
I think you did a good job showcasing what think Jay White's NJPW character year so far. I liked that you did 1:00-1:28 part were you did not show his face doing the knife stuff. Great use of speed ups and transitions. And fade to grayscale after the Tanahashi loss. I really liked that how at had 7:33-8:27 you inserted the promo, with Jay White's calm cadence it sounded like movie or TV narration. Some probably knitpicks I have are I felt like having him he is going after Okada and repeating what he said at the conference and I would have liked to see from a story but, I am not sure putting a in depth focusing on his other matches (It felt like his to big January matches took a lot). I think the effects worked well and helped amplify the video tone and story.
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Post by Arguden on Jan 9, 2019 17:24:14 GMT
P1: Perfect job and storytelling as usual, loved the effects and transitions. Also your song choices were on point. Althought it was almost 10 minutes it was so fun to watch, I have always been a big fan of you and I can easily say that this is one of your best, well done!
Pain: ...
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Post by fanofaneraproducts on Jan 9, 2019 17:30:27 GMT
Pain: HOLY SHITTT. I DIDNT EXPECT THIS THO. PRETTY AWESOME WORK AS ALWAYSSS!!!
i choose p1
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undisputed
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Post by undisputed on Jan 10, 2019 11:52:51 GMT
P1: I have told you time and time again your videos make me cry ahahah. This video was very well done, I am a very big fan of Jay white , and you did a very splendid job on representing the witch blade character. I didn’t live the cc, but it was a good job, the effects were amazing as usual, and the sync was spot on like always. Great job P1!
Move votes goes to p1
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riot
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Post by riot on Jan 11, 2019 21:08:25 GMT
Pain: loved it , that absolute invisible video! Really relates to my happiness rn!
P1: Awesome!! Really liked it and all the songs you used were like stuck in my head after i seen it, liked it alottt, Jay is really overrated but that didn't take away how you made him look with the video.
My vote goes to P1
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pk
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Post by pk on Jan 12, 2019 1:59:19 GMT
P1: I wasn't a fan of the first bit showcasing White pre-Switchblade, the song choice wasn't that great in my opinion and It ended so abruptly, after that the MV was cool it got better and overall it was a great video. I'm not a fan of MV focusing on just matches without any story. But that's just me. Overall it was a good video, I do think you can and will do better in the future. Probably the best editor over here alongside with Sarcastic.
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Post by dead sarcastic on Jan 12, 2019 3:10:07 GMT
P1: Sucks that Pain couldn't compete, but at the same time I'm glad he didn't. I don't think him or any one else on the group could have beat this video. This is excellent and in my opinion it's your best work. By far it's your most original video. Not only that but it's pretty creatively made. The structure is amazing for a 10 minute video. These long videos require a lot of thought in to it; not only so it could be well done but to keep the viewer focused. And throughout this video I was never bored. It was pretty enjoyable! Only complaints would be to remove some stuff that isn't needed, such as the bullet Club breaking apart. I think if you wanted to include that then you should have put the Jay White prediction promo over it. Kind of similar to what I did with my Omega vs White MV but it still would have looked perfectly done in this video. Another thing was the shake effect. You use it pretty well, but at times it feels bland or it just doesn't look right. Maybe without it and sI me flickers it would have looked a lot nicer. Regardless these things don't change the fact that this was amazing!Congrats on moving on to the finals! You earned it!
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Post by soulfrostx1 on Jan 12, 2019 13:53:29 GMT
Great job P1, this is definetely your best work, it was so entertaining and different thoughout the whole video and this is the reason why I could mae it through all the 10 minutes, you made me like jay white even more then I did before so this should say something about this video!
Loved the song choices, video was very smooth, super good stuff as usual, I like the fact that last competition you did Okada and in this one Jay White that stabbed him in the back with Gedo I can't wait for your next Music video!
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