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Post by Storm on Jan 1, 2022 8:31:14 GMT
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Post by Storm on Jan 3, 2022 19:17:53 GMT
DmsVFX: Of course there is red haha! Like I mentioned in a tron feedback, everything is so dynamic and flows so well! Love your clip choices in this and how hard hitting everything was with flash + shake! Beginning was my favorite part with how it built from the dark and ending clip was just perfect! You edited this song so well and start the MEP perfectly!
Bluevinsmoke: I see that you are working on your sync but it's still a bit awkward, in the beginning you really struggled but later it got better. Really liked your overlay choice and part really looked nice, story of her as a champion was a little nice detail. Just ending clip was really ugly and shake was not my thing.
Sami: Stan Mina! I know you made this way before any of your edits for this comp and this is a proof how much you improved. Even tho it's far from perfect, it showed a lot of your ideas and what you were trying to do, that's what it matters to me.
Stylopz: I ain't gonna say shit, you have already heard all my praises. My favorite editor, my favorite part in the MEP, what's else there to say?
PTSan: This part was all over the place, I really couldn't figure out what you wanted to show there. It was at least synced for the most part so I can appreciate that but clip choices were just all over the place and that last clip in slow mo just didn't look good at all.
sts: You are an experienced MEP creator already so idk what to tell you, everything was how it should be. Great clip choices while everything is synced with some nice effects, I really loved the last clip choice, it was a nice ending.
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Post by Sami on Jan 4, 2022 0:27:50 GMT
DmsVFX : I felt like the colors were a bit too powerful. There was a bit too much of a difference between the white and red which created a contrast I wasn't a fan of. I liked that film effect and the transitions between clips. Slow mo were interestingly put in my opinion
Storm : That beginning ! That fucking beginning ! It was maaaad maaaan. It everytime makes me go like "holy shit". Not a huge fan of this rose floating effect tho or at least not this long. I loved the colors you used.
BlueVinsmoke : I loved the synch you made it very well. As I already told you I might would have crossfade the 2 clips at 1:25 & 1:27 to let it flow better. It would have looked way less "clip to clip". Also Unagi & then Mina hugs would have looked better crossfaded. And that last shake effect has a bit too much of amplitude in my opinion
Stylopz : First of all I must say that it's my favorite part of this MEP. I love the colors, the filters, the clips chosen and how you crossfade each clip. Also how smooth this change of clip looks at 2:18 is insane as fuck ! It looks so smooth, it's fucking perfect ! You're a mad man haha. I absolutely love the clip at 2:32 and how you transitioned to it and how perfectly it synch to the beat. Your part is on point and absolutely mad
PTSan : It seems like the clips chosen are not adapted to the song and are pretty put randomly. There is even the same move (even if it's not from the same match) twice in a 30s interval... And that last clip was a bit long
sts : I like how the clips went from one to another, that part with the slow mo was interesting but I felt like it broke a bit the pace of the rest of your part. I love the ending tho !
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Post by Arguden on Jan 7, 2022 14:23:46 GMT
DmsVFX: Really cool part, you had some very smooth transitions and flow. 00:27 until the end was very good, I loved how it was synced. Cool CC choice even though it is similar to your other videos again, it's just a preference thing so I'm not going to complain. Great part.
Storm: That beginning transition was really sick. Overlay definitely works with the song/MEP extremely well, very creative. CC is on point as always. I felt like your cinematic style didn't really fit the video but it's probably because of the pacing of the other parts, so if you separate your part from the video it is really damn good. Awesome stuff.
BlueVinsmoke: Syncing could've been a little better even though some of the moves were synced very well. I liked your overlay as well, it is a nice touch since the CC isn't really that strong. Overall it was a very fun part which felt like it needed just a little bit more.
Sami: Not the biggest fan of the coloring in this one, it looks nice but it doesn't really add to the video unlike most of the other parts. Transitions were overall good, except 01:46, which could've been better if you showed the full move. 02:04 was really sick, definitely my favourite moment from the part. Good work.
Stylopz: Idk what to say man, everything is just on point. I love how you use the 3D effect nowadays, it is very nice to see. 02:13 is so well done. Amazing part.
PTSan: Some of the transitions looked cool but I wish you used less of them. Also at the bridge of the song you should've just gone for facial expressions with slow motion and dissolve. CC was alright, nothing very special but it does the job. Not the biggest fan of this part, with some little improvements you can have a lot better outcome.
sts: nice
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Post by stylopz on Jan 8, 2022 20:56:46 GMT
DMSVFX: This was very smoothly edited. The flow here was superb and the film damage just meshes so well with the CC, one thing I notice is you keep the same type of CC which is your thing, no issue on that. The scene links were dope and I loved the syncing techniques you used, they came off more unpredictable. Awesome part.
Storm: Probably my favorite part. I just loved the presentation of Sakisama, and to be honest the CC and overlays work here was perfect as always, really fit the part and the vibe as whole. Clip selection was beautiful and the clips duration was perfect for what you were going for. Outstanding part!
BlueVinsmoke: This was actually decently edited but to be honest I think the way you linked certain scenes between Tam's kicks was quite awkward. I think in termos of sync it was an improvement but there is some work that needs to be done. That ending clip with that shake and CC Change was tbh super unnecessary, it looked really rough IMO.
Sami: I have been watching you grow as an editor and I think that you are gonna be a super good editor at this rate. This was a really good part and I was quite impressed. The only things I could think of critiquing here would be the colour grading chosen and also the Stardom subtitles, I just think they look awful in a video without voiceovers.
PTSan: I dont know man I really wish I had something good to say about this but to be fair it is hard. Some of the kicks are synced but you completely slow moing a clip for goddamn 10 secs when song picks really didnt do it for me.
STS: Nice, mines Buddy Murphy. For real, you know what you are doing as an editor at this point and everything was nice as a whole. The slow mos werent my thing but they work well with your editing. CC was cool and tbh in terms of sync it is your best edit in MEPs that I have seen. Good stuff.
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Post by soulfrostx1 on Jan 19, 2022 20:42:08 GMT
DMS: I like the red only CC, it fits her I think. Solid synch and overall good effects, they were pretty fluid, also the breakdown part was very cool.
Storm: This CC was also cool, the overlay was a nice touch and fit the lady C attitude. I like the fact that it was not too fast paced unlike the rest of video but it stood out.
VinSmoke: I'm a sucker for the snow overlay so I liked it, also CC fit with it. Synch was nice and the part was good but the shake ending was kinda sus.
Sami: The CC was nice but I would have put some extra lighting or something to make the pink color look a little smoother. Synch was not bad but needs some improvements.I would have put the heart transition after the hand sign instead of before.
Stylopz: I really liked the transition into the "breakdown" and the editing of that part was very well synched and had smooth transitions. I also liked the transition in the end.
PTSan: It started quite well but I think that during the slow part you should have put some more facial expressions or some slowed down clips. Some parts are a bit laggy, so if you can, fix that and the ending was kind of sus because the music went from slow to fast but the clip stayed the same.
sts: Ok part.
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Post by leomercyeditorking on Jan 19, 2022 21:06:14 GMT
DMS: I like the red only CC, it fits her I think. Solid synch and overall good effects, they were pretty fluid, also the breakdown part was very cool.
Storm: I really liked the cc change at the beginning it really fits the song, I also liked the vocal synch you did and the cc, the petals overlay was really good too. Great work.
VinSmoke: I'm a sucker for the snow overlay so I liked it, also CC fit with it. Synch was nice and the part was good but the shake ending was kinda sus.
Sami: The CC was okay but it could have been better, I saw what you tried to do at 1:47 and I suggestions for the next time is to make the crossfade shorter and ,if you can find them, to have both clips with the same angle. Overall the part was good.
Stylopz: I liked how you used the crossfades ,especially between the moves, and the rgb, 2:32 was fantastic, good job.
PTSan: It started quite well but I think that during the slow part you should have put some more facial expressions or some slowed down clips. Some parts are a bit laggy, so if you can, fix that and the ending was kind of sus because the music went from slow to fast but the clip stayed the same.
sts: Ok part.
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Post by bluevinsmoke on Jan 22, 2022 0:19:50 GMT
DmsVFX:
Red, red everywhere haha
That was sick, you did justice to the red queen.
Really dynamic and strong editing.
Storm:
I love how you made this part much less fast and more elegant because it fits Sakisama’s character.
I loved the chair rotation from her entrance, so cool.
Excellent and stands out from the other parts.
Sami:
MINA IS THE 🐐
I liked it, it was very nice overall.
I can definitely see that you had fun editing it because you love Mina.
Stylopz:
man that was awesome, you just know your stuff and it fitted Mayu perfectly in my opinion.
One of my favorite parts.
PTSan:
not gonna lie I didn’t like, many moves didn’t go with the song and there was this moment when the song went differently and you did nothing different to match the song.
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Post by p1 on Jan 22, 2022 1:17:22 GMT
DmsVFX: A really great part, it was all really smooth and had a great flow. CC looks really good in my opinion and the sync you did was somewhat unusual at some parts, but well done and I liked it.
Storm: Great presentation of the wrestler, great overlays and great structure. Everything was well put together and I really have no complaints (like I ever do with your videos). Just so great.
BlueVinsmoke: This was better than your solo video for this competition, especially in terms of sync later in the part, but there are still some things to be fixed, there were some awkward clips in the beginning and that final clip wasn't needed. Visually it looked good with the overlay, and overall it was a fun part to watch, I just know you can do better.
Sami: I swear you were in like 30 videos in this competition. I already said what I think about you, really good for your experience level, not afraid to take risks or shoot for the moon, and this part was no different. Stardom subtitles bummed me out a bit, but aside from that, this was a really well done part.
Stylopz: Similar as with Storm, I got tired of saying how good you are. Everything was super smooth and on point, it all flew by really well and it was so well edited.
PTSan: I feel like everything has been said already so I don't want to repeat too much of it. Anyway, it was all over the place at times, clip selection looked like not a lot of time or effort was put in it and there were some really awkward moments like that long slowmo. Sync was okay for the bigger part of the video so that was positive. I feel the part had to be better.
sts: Probably a good part idk.
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