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Post by Storm on Jan 1, 2022 8:39:23 GMT
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Post by Storm on Jan 4, 2022 13:32:52 GMT
Sami: YAHHHH! This was the edit that shocked me when I watched it at first, still is super surprising really. You have been editing for under a year and you just go head first into editing someone's reign which is no small task to do, especially for someone new. Instead of being scared of it you just went yolo and this is so damn impressive! Love the song choice, not an easy band to edit and you handled it pretty well. Like I told you already you a bit overcommitted to show build up to matches but that's okay, better to show more than enough than to not show enough. Editing here was pretty fucking good, your cuts were spot on with a great flow and some focus on sync. My favorite part would be small details to which you paid attention because of course this was something personally important to you. Overall this edit was so fun and you did a fucking great job at showcasing her reign! I hope you'll remake this when you get even better in the next couple of years just so you can see yourself how much you progressed.
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Post by soulfrostx1 on Jan 4, 2022 14:27:46 GMT
Sami: another edit, another joshi wrestler. Good job man this was kinda long but you made it fun to watch, I like the fact that the edit is quite simple but effective. I enjoyed how you showcased her in this video and I might watch some of her matches now. Overall good job, keep it up.
I think I have seen so many question mark kicks that I might dream it tonight
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Post by FUCK THE FEDS--> on Jan 8, 2022 16:01:53 GMT
I can tell you are quite new to this, but for someone who is relatively new this is quite well. The strongest part of this video is definitely the structuring. You should've played with your footage a bit more and tried to dig out more segments as it just feels like a really long Arisa match recap collection which is harder for the viewer to grasp what the video is about. 6 minutes long for a video like this is a bit too much too, I love arisa so that is the only thing that got me through it to be honest. Keep on going it will come over time.  |
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Post by stylopz on Jan 16, 2022 18:26:54 GMT
This is ambitious as fuck and for the time you been doing this I find it incredible you went for a type of video like this! Kudos for that! When I see the Arisa/ Tam part I right remember that I made a Tam video LMFAO But I feel like you did a great job in showing Arisa's success and also struggles by showing her opponents offense and just recapping the matches properly. I feel like you gave the perfect amount of time for each recap. To be honest, I just feel like I will never be a fan of subtitles and especially the ugly ones that Stardom has but this was a while ago when made and I'm sure you've learned in the meantime. Tbf other critique I have is this is a fast asf song and I couldn't understand the pacing here at all. Some transitions were quite random tbf but the star one in the end was cool and made sense. Good work Sami!
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Post by sandy on Jan 18, 2022 6:39:25 GMT
Man Sami, I think you brought more videos to this event than I ever have in my entire FMVC career. Thank you for that, it really shows how dedicated you are not only to this group, but also to learn and grow as an editor.
This was a very fun video. From the first watch, it's noticeable that you understand what the basics of making a video are. I think what you were most strongest with was your pacing. I think you did a great job in giving more time to the matches with Tam, HZK, or Utami as these were some of the most memorable matches from Arisas reign. And you showcasing these matches in a longer amount of time emphasises that. So I'm glad you knew what matches should have been showcased a lot more.
I also enjoyed seeing you use some effects and color changes to break this video into sections and to match the tone of the song. It made the video a lot more fun and surprising as to see in what direction the editing was heading.
Great job at adding voice overs and using the clips of her promos with the subtitles. I think that's very helpful to follow the story of her reign.
Some things I would have recommended you work on with this video would be syncing and timing. I felt like a lot of this video relied a lot on pace, and that's why I think you did such a great job with your pacing. But i would like to see you try to sync the clips to the beat of the song a lot more. Cause you did a good job on knowing when to cut a clip, although of course there were clips throughout that ended abruptly, but I think most of the reason why it felt like that was cause the syncing was off. So I feel like for whatever you make next or if you revise this video again, I recommend working more on syncing. And if you need help while making a video, feel free to message me or someone in the community, or share it publicly on discord or on one of the threads in this forum.
But honestly this is super impressive. For a 6 minute long video edited by someone who just started editing, its noticeable how driven and determined you are. I'm excited to see the rest of the videos your brought, just as much as I am excited to see your growth in the editing community!
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Post by p1 on Jan 19, 2022 21:09:59 GMT
The first thing I want to mention is your will to do something as ambitious and demanding as a title reign recap, for me that's really impressive because it took me a long time to transition from highlights to MVs because I was really anxious about how it would look like. You decided to do it and it turned out really well in the end, so I would say that this attempt was successful. Another thing I could feel throughout the video is your personal connection with it, and that's something that really can be seen. It was structured well, you gave viewers a bit of a backstory for matches and that's good. Song choice was really good too, and for a relatively long video it didn't feel long at all because it was really fun. The editing was mostly simple, you didn't go overboard on things and that's what I really appreciate (some transitions weren't needed tho, but I'm pretty sure you already know it). Overall a really good MV, I liked it a lot and I think you will only get better.
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Post by SSJ on Jan 21, 2022 0:33:27 GMT
Awesome video for the best girl!!!! I’m amazed at how many videos you were able to pump out in such a short span!! Great stuff
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Post by bluevinsmoke on Jan 21, 2022 22:23:43 GMT
Dude, the fact that chose to edit a title reign is unbelievably bold from you, huge respect.
And that happens to be one of my favorite title reigns from last few years.
I really think that for someone that only started to editing in a more “professional” way, you did very good.
It wasn’t perfect of course, but most of it was good and I can’t believe that you did that well.
You’re the man Sami!
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Post by Arguden on Jan 22, 2022 8:30:59 GMT
Sami: Fucking hell 6 minutes, my first 6+ minutes video was in 2020, which means 3 years after I started editing wrestling. For someone who started editing less than a year ago, that's really impressive. Song choice is obviously amazing to me since they're my favourite band. I loved how you had footage from segments and stuff, it definitely made the matches look even more special and added some diversity to the video since it's mostly match highlights. Editing wasn't incredible but it does the job. Overall this was a good recap.
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