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Post by Storm on Jan 1, 2022 8:43:03 GMT
Remember to feedback the video (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. Due date is 21st January.
Sami:
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Post by Storm on Jan 4, 2022 13:36:39 GMT
Sami: Structure of this really didn't pay off. Build up was way too long for a pay off to be super short and just have no impact whatsoever. You had the right idea tho, showing her slowly fading into that darkness and showing how it happened. Editing was mostly good, there were some bad frames but you overall did a good job. I wish I could say more about this, it was a great idea that fell short in the execution, it happens sometimes and you learn from it.
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Post by soulfrostx1 on Jan 4, 2022 14:19:17 GMT
Sami: I think this video was quite nice, I think the story was quite cool even tho’ I’m not super interested in it. The pace was alright and the video was enjoyable. There were some sus clips like at 00:30 but it can happen. Overall good job, keep up the grind.
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Post by FUCK THE FEDS--> on Jan 8, 2022 16:09:09 GMT
It would have helped if you added voiceovers instead of just the subtitles for future preference. This video as a whole was really messy, you started with a few Oedo Tai clips and then reverted to the old SLK like it was nothing, to then start adding the quotes of SLK slowly turning into her darker self, that concept alone is really cool if you did it properly. Maybe it's the music, maybe just the lack of editing but it didn't work. I know you are new to this so don't take lack of editing as insult, but it's really weird that at the end you have SLK saying she is going to surpass Mayu but it leads to nothing?? It will come with time just keep working with it, play around with your basics more, maybe plan out your video with a storyboard before editing it.
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Post by stylopz on Jan 16, 2022 18:35:10 GMT
I feel like the idea was right but the build up was too damn long. I liked the editing but the structure or video itself was quite weird. Tbf when the slow part came, it should've been when SLK went to Oedo Tai. Like for a viewer who has no knowledge in Stardom, I feel like there would be a lot of confusion in knowing what's going or what your idea was. But tbh it can happen, what matters is that you took the risk, next time I'm sure it will pay off.
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Post by p1 on Jan 19, 2022 20:37:20 GMT
I get the idea, what you were trying to do and where to go with this video, but I have to say that the execution of that idea wasn't the best, and it has the most to do with the structure of the video. The technical part of editing was cool and everything fit together, but the clip structure was confusing at times and the buildup-payoff ratio wasn't very good because the buildup was relatively long and the payoff was really short and I didn't really have time to get into it. I can tell that you are new to editing, and the mistakes will happen, what matters is whether or not you learn from them.
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Post by bluevinsmoke on Jan 21, 2022 22:31:01 GMT
I love the idea, I really do.
But, I have to say that I agree with the others on this one.
The structure wasn’t the best and it made the payoff to feel less impactful than it could’ve been.
Not a bad edit, but certainly not your best.
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Post by Arguden on Jan 22, 2022 8:11:52 GMT
Sami: When you use a song like this you should focus on the pacing, and I felt like it didn't really do the job in this one. Other than that, CCs could've been stronger. Editing was alright, overall it wasn't the best video I've seen from you.
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