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Post by Storm on Jan 1, 2022 8:46:00 GMT
Remember to feedback the video (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. Due date is 21st January.
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Post by Storm on Jan 4, 2022 13:43:16 GMT
Sami: More of deathmatches, I fucking hate you... BUT THIS WAS THE SHIT THO!!! Lyrical sync, overall everything synced, pacing on point... This has attributes of a real MV and it really is so fucking good. You presented our boy Drew perfectly while being true to the song and even have a different structure based on the tone and GOD FUCKING DAMN when that breakdown hit you edited it like a man! This overall was so fucking good and I was and still am so fucking proud of you after seeing this, you learned so fucking fast and this edit was a real deal. You really should be proud of yourself and of your grow this year as an editor, and this is only the beginning...
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Post by soulfrostx1 on Jan 4, 2022 13:52:57 GMT
Sami I don’t mind this video, I think the song fits the wrestler even tho’ I do not know him. The edit overall was quite enjoyable but there are some things that I personally would have changed like the shake, I think in some part it shouldn’t have been used or the match card graphic you put at some point of the video, it seemed a bit out of place in my opinion. Anyway the edit was pretty good, nice job man.
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Post by FUCK THE FEDS--> on Jan 12, 2022 16:26:05 GMT
Break Stuff! This was a cool video, your strongest point here was definitely the clip selection, the song went well with the wrestler and it helped portray the wrestler. I think your biggest flaw comes with your pacing, the consistency is on and off which kills the flow of the video. The shake effect throughout didn't work too well in your favour, it just didn't do anything to make it stand out, you should've maybe just used it for a stronger point of the video or took the route down 2020 and just used it for beat syncing. Also the crossfades on the moves need some work, space them out a little more so it's not right before or right on the impact of the move as it doesn't look too clean. Nice work overall, takes a bit of practice but you will get there!
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Post by stylopz on Jan 16, 2022 18:14:23 GMT
The song choice and subject of the video connection is definetely IMO the strongest part of the video. There was some really good clip choices especially in the breakdown. I won't go too deep in the editing stuff because for the you been doing it, you are getting really good. I thought that the shake you did looked pretty good but to be honest it could've been only in the breakdown but that's just my opinion. Around the 1 minute mark I felt like the match graphic felt out of place but that's something you will learn down the line. Apart all what I mentioned, I thought that this is easily your best video! Great job, keep it up!
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Post by p1 on Jan 19, 2022 20:30:14 GMT
I'm not familiar with Drew Parker at all, but throughout this video you made me realize what he should represent and what he is about, so good work on that. Editing was really well done for the most part, though my personal opinion is that the shake shouldn't have been used in some parts of the video, but I don't mind it that much. The match graphic felt random and a bit out of place, but other than those things, I really enjoyed this video and I wanna see more of your stuff. Breakdown was the best part of it all, what you did with it was great. So yeah, overall a really good video.
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Post by bluevinsmoke on Jan 21, 2022 22:34:04 GMT
Perfect song choice, it really felt like it belongs there.
You made Drew to look so cool and fearless.
Probably your best song choice and best execution in terms of sync.
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Post by Arguden on Jan 22, 2022 8:07:46 GMT
Sami: I'm not familiar with the wrestler but from the looks of the video, it works pretty good with the wrestler. Pacing could've been a little bit better but still it was alright. I also really loved the shake, it looks really cool. Awesome work man.
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