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Post by Storm on Jan 1, 2022 8:57:23 GMT
Remember to feedback the video (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. Due date is 21st January.
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Post by Storm on Jan 3, 2022 14:03:54 GMT
DmsVFX: You really love your red, don't you. First of all I fucking loved the nameplate, that glitch effect added a lot to it and it just looked interesting! Don't know what to say about the structure here really tbh, like you are so experienced already I have nothing special to say here. You know how to structure the video, everything was in the right place and you know when to use as a move and when facial expression. You talk a lot about dynamic camera movement and that's how I would describe your editing style, it's so dynamic and everything is so damn fast! It's a really good thing in my opinion because you are very consistent so everything flows together really well and it's a joy to watch. Even tho I mentioned it as a joke I like your grading choice, it made him look all dark and sinister, very mood fitting for him and it wasn't too dark or weird at any point so you balanced it out really well. ALSO GOOD FUCKING JOB ON OVERLAYS, I hate them because people just slap them on to make boring edits/parts interesting but they most of time look out of place and add nothing, you did a really damn good job here and it actually added to the edit! Overall this was a fantastic edit, I have seen a few Jay trons and this by far is the best one, no complaints from me here.
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Sami
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Post by Sami on Jan 3, 2022 23:48:26 GMT
I don't know much about trons to be honets so I'm gonna just say what I thought about it (which is the point of feedback anyway lol). I love this clip at 0:25 it looks so dope and fits very well on the song the "Jay White" text is great and I also love the animations on it. The effects on the clips are so good and I'm absolutely turned on by these colors, render quality also is crazy. Very great work
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Post by Arguden on Jan 5, 2022 18:35:31 GMT
DmsVFX: First of all this is a really good titantron, you were one of the best titantron editors of last year in my opinion (sadly there aren't many left) but one problem I have with your videos is that your videos always look very similar in terms of effects and coloring. I think you should try using other overlays instead of film damage because it doesn't always match with the wrestler/theme. Red definitely fits Jay very well so I'm not going to complain about the CC. Pacing and syncing is on point, nameplate looks really nice as well especially with the glitch effect. Overall this is one of your best titantrons, great job.
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Post by SSJ on Jan 19, 2022 14:16:42 GMT
This was really great man!! I know next to nothin about Trons but great freaking work fr!!
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Post by soulfrostx1 on Jan 20, 2022 17:22:23 GMT
DmsVFX: Awesome tron, I liked the CC, it fits Jay White and the nameplate/logo are simple but very well used. The synch was on point and everything and the loop was well done. Overall awesome.
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Post by stylopz on Jan 21, 2022 7:51:15 GMT
This is perhaps the best Jay White tron I've seen. The editing itself was top notch and the use of effects was done to perfection. I love the CC here a lot (that red diffusion and desaturation really is your thing) and that nameplate was super sick! One thing I noticed is you do such a smooth use of the overlays it doesn't look like it's out of place which is what usually happens with other editors who add them. One thing I would recommend is which I feel like in your future edits you need to work on newer looks for your videos, because just sticking to what you already know isn't what we should aim for, but rather get out of the comfort zone. Sick work as always.
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p1
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Post by p1 on Jan 22, 2022 0:39:40 GMT
I'm not really into titantrons and stuff like that, but I can recognize a good titantron when I see it. This is probably the best Jay White tron I have seen on the internet, and it isn't really close. CCs are something that caught my eye first, that red one looked really beautiful, especially because it fit White. Nameplate looks amazing, and overall the tron was very dynamic and it's exactly how all trons should be in my opinion. So yeah, this was a really well done tron. Awesome work.
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