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Post by dead sarcastic on Jul 14, 2019 21:40:54 GMT
Remember to vote and feedback both videos (make sure to give substantial feedback). Failure to do so will cause one point to be deducted. Also, make sure to rate both videos in the pain and sarcastic Ratings Club thread
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Post by dead sarcastic on Aug 1, 2019 17:34:01 GMT
For someone's frist time editing an MMV this was pretty good! I was actually going to watch this anime a few years back, but only made it to the second episode. After watching this, I'll definitely try to finish the anime.
The video was well edited. Love the flash transitions. Was that used to have a connection with gun sounds? If it was then that's genius! And your way of building up to the final moments of the video made it more dramatic and it kind of made me feel anxious as if it wasn't going to have a happy ending.
I do have some minor criticism tho. This isn't a big problem, but try to hide the subtitles. It's kind of pointless to have cinematic bars and not completely hide watermarks or in this subtitles. It doesn't bother me much, but it would look a bit better. You could also zoom in a bit to hide them. Another concern of mine was the audio which at times ended abruptly. Give it a small fade at the end to smoothen it.
Other than that, this was awesome and I hope you keep making more MMVs. Would love to see more Anime videos (AMVs), heck I would love to see MMVs more often. Really good job pain! It was great to compete with you again.
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Post by [pain] on Aug 3, 2019 20:48:37 GMT
For someone's frist time editing an MMV this was pretty good! I was actually going to watch this anime a few years back, but only made it to the second episode. After watching this, I'll definitely try to finish the anime. The video was well edited. Love the flash transitions. Was that used to have a connection with gun sounds? If it was then that's genius! And your way of building up to the final moments of the video made it more dramatic and it kind of made me feel anxious as if it wasn't going to have a happy ending. I do have some minor criticism tho. This isn't a big problem, but try to hide the subtitles. It's kind of pointless to have cinematic bars and not completely hide watermarks or in this subtitles. It doesn't bother me much, but it would look a bit better. You could also zoom in a bit to hide them. Another concern of mine was the audio which at times ended abruptly. Give it a small fade at the end to smoothen it. Other than that, this was awesome and I hope you keep making more MMVs. Would love to see more Anime videos (AMVs), heck I would love to see MMVs more often. Really good job pain! It was great to compete with you again. I think the same, it was amazing to compete with you again, I was preparing an AMV for the group channel
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Post by dead sarcastic on Aug 4, 2019 18:51:38 GMT
that would be sick!
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Post by pk on Aug 6, 2019 0:55:01 GMT
Cool match, I'm still not that into MMV but I think this was a good match. Pain: Nice vid, I've never watched Anime in my life so I'm not familiar with that type of shows. But I kinda get what you were going for. The edit is OK and everything was there. Don't really have any major feedback since I'm not the biggest expert but for a clueless guy you delivered. Sarcastic: I Commented in the vid how I felt about it, and to this day is one of the few I actually see the appeal for. It helps that is with a topic I understand and I can relate to. You two are way too talented, and I'm looking forward to more of this vids so I can understand them better. Maybe a Southpaw or Rocky MMV from Pain will be nice, since I'm going to kick his ass whenever he wants to face me.
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Post by p1 on Aug 22, 2019 18:58:56 GMT
pain: Really well edited with some nice transitions, especially the flash ones. Loved the way you did the drama by the end, really got me into the video. Other than that, I don't know what else to say. I will agree with Sarcastic, you should've hidden the subtitles, it would make the video look a lot more professional. But really good video, you keep improving every time.
Sarcastic: I've watched all of your MMVs, but this has to be my favorite one. I really can't find any bad things. Sync was on point, I liked the song choice and could understand the story of the movie very well. American Beauty is a great movie and I'm happy to see a video about it. A great work overall.
Vote: Sarcastic
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Post by stylopzproductions on Aug 23, 2019 11:11:30 GMT
pain: Video got taken down, so I can't say anything about it.
Sarcastic: Good work! Syncing was good, it had a very nice story, movie looks great and the story was captured really well. I also liked the CC's. Great song choice too.
Vote goes for sarcastic because I just couldn't watch pain's video
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